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Thursday, July 14, 2016

Expensive humor


Its time again for some Friday fiction. Following is a 100-word fictional story written for Rochelle's Friday Fictioneers . To read other entries, please click here.




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Copyright-Sandra Crook


“This is why I hate coming back home. I am never moving back here!”

“Relax! You are over reacting. Try to enjoy it. I am sure you will miss it when our trip ends”, he grinned.

“Over reacting?! We haven’t moved an inch in the last 10 minutes!”
Wiping her sweat, she looked in the mirror. “Eeesh! I am going to look like a scarecrow in the wedding!” she wailed.

“You look like your face caught fire and I put it out with a track shoe.”

She glared at him.

“What!? I just thought this makes for a better simile!”  
 
 
PS : So what do you think of the story? Would love to know your thoughts.
 
 
 

 

 
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12 comments:

  1. DahliaJuly 15, 2016 at 9:38 AM

    OMG! He actually said that? I wonder if he reached the wedding - in one piece :D

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    1. SamraJuly 15, 2016 at 10:53 AM

      Thanks for reading Dahlia! Luckily for him, it was taken in the right spirit :)

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  2. brudbergJuly 15, 2016 at 1:04 PM

    i just saw the comment above... And if there ever was a wedding, revenge will come in small measures...

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    1. SamraJuly 18, 2016 at 11:54 AM

      Haha! They were attending somebody else's wedding. And they are already married. And that is probably why he was able to take that extreme step :P

      Thanks for reading:)

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  3. MikeJuly 18, 2016 at 4:02 AM

    He sounds like a bit of a wag. ��

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    1. SamraJuly 18, 2016 at 11:56 AM

      To be fair to my character, he was just being fun! And even though she did glare at him, I hope it would end in good humor :)

      Thanks for reading Mike.

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  4. Rochelle Wisoff-FieldsJuly 18, 2016 at 5:09 AM

    Dear Sampada.

    I think he's in trouble. Big time. Made me laugh.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. SamraJuly 18, 2016 at 11:56 AM

      I am so glad it made you laugh, Rochelle. Thanks for reading.

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  5. Sujatha SathyaJuly 21, 2016 at 2:11 AM

    Ouch ! The track show comment ! Haha

    But nicely used prompt I must say

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    1. SamraJuly 21, 2016 at 12:05 PM

      Glad it made you laugh! :) Thank you Sujatha!

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  6. UnknownAugust 3, 2016 at 7:23 AM

    This one is funny Sampada!Haha

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    1. SamraAugust 3, 2016 at 8:06 AM

      Glad to give you a chuckle :) Thanks for reading.

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