Wednesday, March 23, 2016

Door #305




He was now at door 305. He pulled down his brown hat a little, tucked his revolver and looked at the names one last time. He felt sad that she was on the top of the list.

But nothing could stop him.


12 comments:

  1. Wish a miracle could stop her from entering the door of death.

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  2. Yes, there are some things only a miracle can change.

    Thanks for reading Kalpana :)

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  3. OOh I wonder what happens next! Such a great take on the prompt!

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  4. A hit list is a good take on the prompt!

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  5. Thank you Hema and Charlotte. I am glad you liked it !

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  6. He might as well have been holding a scythe. Too bad. Well done though.

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  7. Oh, I hope she's not home. What did she do? How does the narrator know her? So many questions.

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  8. @innatejames - Haha ! I dont know either ;) Its left to reader's imagination! Thanks for reading!

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  9. I like where you went with this!

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  10. What a great take on the prompt! Being top on a hit list is definitely not what you want to see.

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  11. Thank you Stacie and D3athLily!

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