Tuesday, March 18, 2008

the colorful night..

The sun was setting in...

The skies got ready to spread its blanket of darkness..the September night was still cool..sending gentle breeze occasionally...making the evening even more beautiful...

The lane was deserted..and dark..except for the dim light from nearby shops and the brightly lit full moon...

Men and buildings alike were reduced to mere black silhouettes....

The color was missing...

Everything was black n grey...

Amidst the calm and eeriness, two hearts created a flutter...

For the first time..black seemed colorful....

They were walking along..silence forming a barrier between the two. neither knew wot to say...

The trees swayed happily...as if welcoming them...

He looked at her..as she shoved the tufts of hair falling on her face...

She looked beautiful...

He felt so lucky to have her beside him..

She blushed deep red..as if reading his mind., a sweet curve appearing on her lips..
"AAaah! this was the smile dat bowled me over! " he smiled to himself...

Only their minds talked...

Nothing happened for a while...


Then his hand brushed hers..and a torrent of emotions ran thru them..

Her heart skipped a beat...

While he was thinking how to silence the silence..she was engulfed ..with fear,confusion,some sort of happiness, exhilaration.....it was all mixed...

She looked at him from the corner of her eyes...

He was handsome. she was so fond of him...she had been eagerly waiting for this day.And when it finally did arrive,she was tensed...A fury of thoughts paralysed her " Am i doin right?? Will this hav a happy ending? Is this true...??"

He ventured...

"you dint answer my question"

"which question??",she feigned ignorance...

hmm..

He took her hand in his...

"what are u doin??" she exclaimed..aghast!

"I want to hold your hand...life long.."

She looked at him affectionately. His eyes reflected deep love..his earnest face showed how much he wanted her...his broad shoulders promised her protection..and strong arms effused warmth...

Her hand was still in his...

"U dint answer me..i am waiting " he reminded her..

"Do i still hav to answer u?? " she replied..sweetly...

He clasped her hand even more tightly..lest she would change her mind.

Their shadows merged..and they melted into darkness...


11 comments:

  1. very romantic...
    good to se u venturing into fiction!

    imagination is the most powerful weapon of a writer..
    and i see u r using it quite well..

    glad to see u firing all ur guns!

    cheers!!

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  2. thx sir...it was ur blog dat got me started..
    and ur comments r dng me immense good..it is making my interest last !!!

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  3. Woooh!!
    I am impressed!!

    Finally..
    I my insignificant life has inspired some great soul!!
    :P
    lol..

    carry on..
    I wish you dont stop writing..

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  4. one mroe thing..
    I will let you out a small secret..

    You know..
    when I tell a story..
    every reader is gripped till the end..
    only bcoz.. he thinks its a real one.. and he beileves..
    these things actually happened with me..
    I mean..
    I heard many of them telling me..
    "Tell us what actually happened!!!"

    And I tell them that way....

    I don't knw if you knw this fact or not..
    but just wanted to share my experience with you..

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  5. Hey Sampada...nice blog yaar....gr8 description....hope u r reading more and more novels these days...keep it up...at least one of our Domnics frnz are gonna become a gr8 author....

    i hav seen many such couples in many places...but never thought of writing the in my blog....

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  6. ha ha..great author aa....still time for dat i suppose...
    thanks....

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  7. wow!!!dis post was really amazing!!!for a moment i was out of da real world;into the world of imagination...hope we get 2 read more n more blogs frm u...keep goin...

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  8. Woww!!!Simply superb.
    The best of all.

    Looked very realistic.It was as if the incidents were taking place in front of my eyes.

    gr88 work..keep it up!!

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  9. Thanks Sriram ... :)
    I can drag a simple thing to pages.. :P

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